The surprise

Mondays Finish the Story

Monday’s finish the story

Link here ->

Finish the story begins with: Hey boys, how ’bout y’all makin’ yer Ma some wind chimes?”


© 2015, Barbara W. Beacham

The Surprise

“Hey boys, how ‘bout ya’ll makin’ yer Ma some wind chimes?”

John and Michael lifted their golden heads. Dad held empty cans in his hands; behind him on the table stood paint.

“Why are you talking funny?” Michael asked. He was given the cans. He could smell the fruit.

“I thought you two could make mom something for mother’s day.”

“That was two weeks ago!” Dad always forgot mother’s day. They always had to fix it.

He scratched his chin. “I know, but better late than never, right?”

The boys shared a look. They marched to the table to begin painting.


“What’s this?” mom asked. She held a box oddly wrapped in painted on newspaper.

“It’s from me.” Dad stood behind the boys, smiling.

She took out the surprise. Red Neck Wind Chimes were painted in big, bold letters.

They were hung on the porch. When the wind blew, she would burst into laughter, and dad never forgot mother’s day again. Registered & Protected 


7 thoughts on “The surprise

  1. Well done! I love the ending. Thank you for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. May I make a request? The link back to the website does not get added to the comment section of the weekly post. If you link to the weekly post, then there will be another way for folks to find you and you will get a bit more traffic. 🙂 Thanks again for writing for the challenge, and be well… ^..^


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s